My eyes cannot see
My ears cannot hear
My nose cannot smell
So much to say
But how can I?
My mouth seems sealed
My legs refuse to stand
My hands would not hold
And of all
My heart stopped beating
Yet I know
With all this pain
Its you who i still love
14 comments:
ain..ur heart stopped beating :| so u wud be dead ehnu! hehe kidding
goodluck! thats all i can say :)
you love her
you go tell her
live happily ever after
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*out of words*
nice one!!
darkangel:- sumtyms heartstops beating.ekam marunuvedhaanun dho :P u no.it starts again aftersumtime.anyway.thnks.
mini:- yeah wish we cud live happily eva after.
forgiven:- thanks
very pretty poem :) Liked it :)
However, you might want to change "noes" to "nose" and "refuses" to 'refuse' :)
Cheers!
ur in LOVE???!!! ...
speechless....
well gudluck :P
thanks raaji
white flower:- hehe.i have always been in love ;) thanks.
TELEPATHY!
TELEPATHY!!
thts the answer.. tell her u love ;) now u can tell ennu.. go0dluckkyyy
woah.. wow.. beautiful poem..
tell her abt ur love.. :) gudluck.. hehe.. tc
wow nice poem :) reali nice
gudluk :)
is that written deep from your heart? sounds like so...
if so... prolly you love this girl really
-angel-
good luck!
:)
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